With a lock across thy face...

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    Gerrit Hermens

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    With a lock across thy face...

    Post by Gerrit Hermens on Wed 14 Dec 2011, 6:48 pm

    Upside down
    not even your smile a frown,
    for upon your head needs be a crown
    oh queen of grace profound!

    Thy honouring leaves of life
    reflected (even the ones in strife)
    tales of your beauty: rife!
    No right has sculptor or knife...

    the bench humbly carries the One fair
    but attempt to be more majestic (very rare),
    it doth not dare,
    for from many it shall receive a glare!

    No, Lady in blue,
    thou art the definition of (and it is true),
    that which my utterance cannot rue,
    but simply state boldly to all the wind that flew:

    Thou art the glory calm
    of the still waters’ palm!
    The essence of grace,
    with a lock across thy face...

    ©G. Hermens, 14-12-2011.
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    Chantelle

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    Re: With a lock across thy face...

    Post by Chantelle on Thu 15 Dec 2011, 4:54 am

    Gerrit, dis mindblowing, baie dankie vir jou intense bydrae tot my foto
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    didiblue

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    Re: With a lock across thy face...

    Post by didiblue on Thu 15 Dec 2011, 2:24 pm

    Snap ek nou jou comment op "Herontmoeting"... Helemal 'n ander uitgang punt ja. Ek hou van "Thou art the glory calm of the still waters’ palm!"
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    Rudi Coetzer

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    Re: With a lock across thy face...

    Post by Rudi Coetzer on Thu 15 Dec 2011, 3:56 pm

    EN DAAR KOM JOU WILLEM WIKKELSPIES TOE SOMMER UIT DIE KAS UIT.
    GOED GEDOEN.
    DIE GEDWONGE RYM PLA NET BAIE PLEKKE.
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    Gerrit Hermens

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    Re: With a lock across thy face...

    Post by Gerrit Hermens on Sun 18 Dec 2011, 4:09 am

    Bly jy hou daarvan Chantelle!

    Didiblue Very Happy

    Rudi, dit voel eerlikwaar nie vir my gedwing nie... Dit voel reg. Dalk het ek nie my gevoel heeltemal reg vertolk in woorde nie?...
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    Re: With a lock across thy face...

    Post by Rudi Coetzer on Mon 19 Dec 2011, 12:13 pm

    so mag opinies mos verskil...
    jy is die creator.as jy happy is met jou eindproduk,is dit wat belangrik is.
    Very Happy
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    Re: With a lock across thy face...

    Post by Gerrit Hermens on Mon 19 Dec 2011, 6:15 pm

    Very Happy

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