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    Hosea's cry

    Gerrit Hermens
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    Post by Gerrit Hermens Mon 19 Dec 2011, 6:35 pm

    Haar binneste lê diep.
    Verlate. Vergete. In ‘n diep,
    stof bedekte hoekie.
    Beneath the dust
    of pain and rejection and abuse
    are memories of joy and acceptance and caress.

    Her facade of stone lingers in my mind...

    Harde hand, het harder geslaan.
    Her gap-toothed grin,
    showing disdain,
    even hate,
    maar nie ‘n gryntjie vreugde.

    Lafvaardsvoet het hard getrap.
    Barbaarse tong het diep gesny.
    Scars of vulgarity remain,
    on the calloused hands
    and deformed,
    once beautiful
    face.
    Deprived of love, she is left lifeless.
    ‘n Skaars funksionerende kadawer.

    Renew her heart oh Lord.
    Have her yearn for my compassionate embrace.
    Heal her, oh God of Love.
    Make her to be once more, a woman of Grace.


    ©G. Hermens, 29-11-2011.


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    Adele Meyer Smit


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    Post by Adele Meyer Smit Tue 20 Dec 2011, 2:14 am

    Sjoe dis diep kyk en diep voel hierdie ... dit is puik!
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    Post by Rudi Coetzer Tue 20 Dec 2011, 4:43 pm

    sou jy die te veel uitroeptekens drop(dis nou een leesteken wat slegs by uitsondering in skryfwerk gebruik behoort te word...)& die ... orals drop ( nog ene wat bitter spaarsamig gebruik behoort te word )....kry jy my Like-vote...
    Very Happy
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    Post by Gerrit Hermens Tue 20 Dec 2011, 11:13 pm

    Dankie Adele!

    Beter Rudi? Smile
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    Post by Rudi Coetzer Wed 21 Dec 2011, 1:35 pm

    daar verdwyn my response....
    jip.
    sommer tonne beter.
    en jyt my vote gekry.
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    Post by Gerrit Hermens Wed 21 Dec 2011, 11:10 pm

    (Groot klop op my rug) Baie dankie! cheers
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    Post by Rudi Coetzer Thu 22 Dec 2011, 11:59 am

    sunny

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