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    Surreal Territory of pain

    Claira Summers
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    Post by Claira Summers Mon 26 Sep 2011, 11:33 pm

    Surreal Territory of pain

    Crushing bones in a body of pain
    Twisting shingles of lustrous desire
    Light swirls incorporate the taste of fire
    Thus body and mind wanting for love
    Ripping a twisted heart to pieces
    The world see it fair
    You’re not worth their care
    The bad one, inside the body of pain
    Looking for drops of hydrating rain

    Staring fixed at the ghosts around
    Trying to fill your duty of innocence
    Failing daily with ongoing persisance
    No minute goes by that victory prevail
    Ripping a twisted life to shreds
    The world see it right
    You’re not worth their fight
    The bad one, inside the mind so vain

    Seeing the trickles of the water of life
    Promised the treasure and giving the strive
    This is the Surreal Territory of pain
    The utter delinquents of the human strain
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    Post by Guest Tue 27 Sep 2011, 12:05 am

    the more I read your work the more it seems you know my planet!!
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    Post by Claira Summers Tue 27 Sep 2011, 12:25 am

    i suddenly do not feel like such an alien anymore
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    Post by Guest Tue 27 Sep 2011, 12:28 am

    nah don’t be as long as the people on our planet understands us the rest doesn’t really matter all that much! I have years ago stopped trying to fit in now I freak them out on purpose ... love the bewildered look on their faces!
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    Post by Claira Summers Tue 27 Sep 2011, 12:30 am

    Good one, i'll try and do that for a laugh rather than wonder what the hell is wrong with me Laughing
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    Post by Guest Tue 27 Sep 2011, 12:38 am

    nothing wrong with you girl, remember it is norm that decides that, who is normal enough to decide who is not? and by what level is that measured...
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    Post by Claira Summers Tue 27 Sep 2011, 12:41 am

    True - we are actually all normal alliens looking for our own kind and planets, and i found mine
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    Post by Guest Tue 27 Sep 2011, 12:45 am

    then welcome home friend

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