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    Unnamed Defeated Concretion

    Claira Summers
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    Post by Claira Summers Mon 26 Sep 2011, 4:39 pm

    Unnamed Defeated Concretion

    How do I say it if words cant describe it
    If you know it but cant touch it
    When its only a faint smell
    A taste remembered
    A shadow on a wall
    A sound from the past
    When it stays visible but unreachable
    How do you articulate emotions you don’t know or have
    A Longing you cant fathom in coalescence
    That sense of loss of you know not what
    Where do you get words for something nameless
    Something that’s breathing without a heartbeat
    A friendship screaming to the world with it’s defeated voice
    What do you call the over bearing desire and lust
    When its not there
    Were do you go when you’re not here
    Dwelling in the land of dreams
    Describing reality as it gets swirled together in a heap of misery
    Were do you live on with this unnamed defeated concretion
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    Post by anderkant Mon 26 Sep 2011, 5:48 pm

    "Something that’s breathing without a heartbeat". I am in awe of your writing.
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    Post by Claira Summers Mon 26 Sep 2011, 5:50 pm

    Thank you indeed for you positive reply anderkant, ist a soul thing
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    Post by Guest Mon 26 Sep 2011, 7:06 pm

    WOW!! this work is phenomenal!! you describe something I have never found words for!
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    Post by Claira Summers Mon 26 Sep 2011, 7:10 pm

    Inspiring to know that someone thinks what you put into words can speak from themselves to, a great big thank you, to you Ronel.

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