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    Gerrit Hermens
    Gerrit Hermens


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    Post by Gerrit Hermens Sat 03 Dec 2011, 6:08 pm

    The gentle breeze sways
    the tall trees from East to West
    illuminating the silver moon.

    The patriotism of this creation
    is so intense it inspires a butterfly
    to soar through uncharted skies.
    It is so passionate in its servitude!

    It produces no light,
    yet in darkness of night
    it reflects second-hand beams, bright,
    of revelation to bring comfort and sight.

    Little children sleep tighter,
    now that the monsters of darkness
    and imagination
    are kept at bay by the humble servant.

    Even when the mist of the unknown,
    veils its presence from sight
    it penetrates the gloom
    with newfound perseverance.

    The serving moon is in no way vain!
    It desires no praise;
    only appreciation of God’s power!

    G. Hermens, 27-12-2007
    AmmieMoon
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    Post by AmmieMoon Sat 03 Dec 2011, 6:30 pm

    Slaan ek my hande om my hart oor hierdie jongman se mede waardering en fyn waarneming van hierdie wonderskone hemel-liggaam! Die maan is my muse en inspirasie, ek voel en beleef haar fases intens elke nag tussen 00:01 en 03:00 wanneer ek vrou alleen op Blouwaterbaai se strand verkeer, die donker oseaan se gladde lyf met my lyf kloof .....waar ek dobberend op my rug slegs my hand hoef op te lig om haar porseleinwang te treel...

    Hierdie gedig van jou beskryf die broos en kalmerende karakter van die maan so senueel .. ware leesgenot.

    Ek nooi jou graag om na die musiek/liriek afdeling van freestyle te gaan en te gaan luister na my voorlesing van my gedig: ' Mankmaan' - miskien kry jy dan 'n idee van die intense band tussen my en hierdie '' verlate hemelkoningin '' Like a Star @ heaven
    Gerrit Hermens
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    Post by Gerrit Hermens Sat 03 Dec 2011, 6:40 pm

    Kry net naglied vir jou... Dis absoluut beautiful!!!!
    Maar ek kry nie Mankmaan nie Crying or Very sad
    AmmieMoon
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    Post by AmmieMoon Sat 03 Dec 2011, 6:47 pm

    So gaan soek ek dit toe self en besef dat ek dit nog nie op FreeStyle geplaas het nie (jammer vir die misverstand)...Hang aan, ek plaas dit gou spesiaal vir jou sommer in die gedig afdeling, gee my net 'n paar minute (die maanvrou is tegnologies gestermd ...giggel) Like a Star @ heaven

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